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  1. ellen.louise

    German Help.

    that is the defenition of passive voice. So yes, that's right.
  2. ellen.louise

    Stand By Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    We did it in class for change in year 11... I don't know what happened to my notes though. from what I remember there was: themes of life and death (the body they go to find, the attitudes towards death, the protagonist's dead brother) rites of passage: the boys were always scared of...
  3. ellen.louise

    Trials: When are they? Are you ready? How were they? (merged)

    Re: When are your trials? Are you ready? (merged) My trials are in one week. Not ready.
  4. ellen.louise

    this true or not

    Ur a real man now. Don't let any dumb-arse bitch mess with that.
  5. ellen.louise

    this true or not

    don't change! there needs to be more nice guys! do you actually tell girls when you're interested in them, or are you just wondering why they won't flirt with you? Cause sometimes girls need a little help recognising when something's there.
  6. ellen.louise

    emo guys different?

    :D
  7. ellen.louise

    Who WON'T be 18 for schoolies?

    I won't be but I'm going to europe in january instead of doing schoolies, and the legal drinking age in germany is 16 anyway.
  8. ellen.louise

    Help: Creative Writing On Inner Journeys???

    You should definitely go in with your story prepared. Maybe try practising adapting it to different questions. Don't ignore the question when you write your story: I wrote an absolutely kick-arse story for a class task but as it didn't meet the Journal requirement of the question it only got a...
  9. ellen.louise

    emo guys different?

    k. technically going on bored of studies in the L&R forum is not really schoolwork. Thus the 'illegal' comment. Don't take me seriously. I don't really give a shit. Thought I should clarify that.
  10. ellen.louise

    Boobs in the PIP

    I vote she does it on man-boobs instead.
  11. ellen.louise

    What the hell...

    It's pretty hard to amke sense when you tsart talking about mummified bears with sharks heads.
  12. ellen.louise

    Need.. girlfriend

    kind of like guys that flirt with everyone. it makes you feel less special when they flirt with you.
  13. ellen.louise

    HARRY POTTER & THE DEATHLY HALLOWS - thoughts (SPOILERS!!)

    "don't pity the dead" as a moral to the story. It was kind of badly done though because it didn't tie in with the story at all, and it was harry's "hallows" or whatever, so evidently he wanted it to be there? WTF?
  14. ellen.louise

    What the hell...

    You have issues. Go see a psychologist.
  15. ellen.louise

    Rate mein essay please!

    [COLOR=lime] I suggest you rewrite this whole thing. You haven't really presented an argument, and what you did say was more like a biology essy. You need to draw a thesis FROM your texts, and then in your intro you need to summarise how exactly your texts convey this. Seriously, I am not...
  16. ellen.louise

    Boobs in the PIP

    :rofl: lol. just lol. well done
  17. ellen.louise

    Rate mein essay please!

    I can't give you feedback on the content cause I can't be bothered reading the whole thing this late at night, but I would suggest you don't abbreviate science fiction in your introduction, and get rid of 'in conclusion' from your conclusion. Never ever begin a conclusion like that. If you need...
  18. ellen.louise

    HARRY POTTER & THE DEATHLY HALLOWS - thoughts (SPOILERS!!)

    agreed predictions that came true: Voldemort dies (duh!) Snape/ Lily <3 Dumbledore's death was pre-arranged to save Draco's soul Draco doesn't like being evil that much: comes back at the end It was Snape's patronus Harry will find the Deathly Hallows Dumbledore was...
  19. ellen.louise

    Story!! What should i call it???

    also, i think ." is more correct than ". if ya want to be really picky.
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