2005 - BOS Scriptwriters Showcase (1 Viewer)

[robo3687]

I think we should have our own little separate showcase where we can share our works with the fellow scriptwriters.

And to start...here is mine...

EDIT: oh and 'Mahue Pouri' means 'Broken Hearted' in Maori

 

[gorgo31]

I think we should have our own little separate showcase where we can share our works with the fellow scriptwriters.

And to start...here is mine...

EDIT: oh and 'Mahue Pouri' means 'Broken Hearted' in Maori

I liked it, reminded me a bit of "24". It was written interestingly in terms of structure and content, and had really good use of scriptwriting formatting / conventions, though I'd like to read your reflection statement to see how / if there was any real Maori influence? I kind of thought that the characters could have been any nationality, situated anywhere. Some of the dialogue probably needed to be sharper - you used "I guess" a lot. Otherwise, well done

As for myself, I did a theatre script, and am too ashamed to be the first one to post! Any takers?

 

[Arvin Sloane]

I've never liked the formatting of scripts.

 

[robo3687]

one reflection statement....

oh and thanks for the comments......

 

[enigma~]

I handed mine in on Monday...i'll post it up when i can be bothered to format it as a word document...its currently in another program...

 

[Pointy Ears]

Ohhh!
I'll read it after hw, and I'll post ya a comment
I'm too scared to post mine up :S

 

[fleepbasding]

Well, I'll begin the trend of drama scripts with my MW and RS. Post up guys! I won't be judgemental, and I don't think anyone else here is either. criticism is welcome, but don't rip it up too much...

 

[enigma~]

btw i forgot to mention before that its me damnation!
I have returned from the dead...

oh and here is my mw
which was not formatted in word so don't give me a hard time!
(oh and its corny)

 

[*caramel adele*]

no! im too scared to post mine, looking back on it now.
i cant believe i wrote some of this stuff. so emabrrassing.
when we handed in our stuff on that day my logbook was tiny compared to everyone else's massive books. did guys write a lot for ur logbooks?
i just ran out of time

 

[gorgo31]

Nah, not really. I just stuck lots of drafts to make it look big.

I doubt they'll check anyway, unless they've got serious concerns about authenticity.

And post-EE2, I think everyone can look back on their work and sigh in exasperation, knowing how they could have made it better etc. The other scripts are all in the Showcase in the English Extension 2 main forum, if you want to have a look at them.

 

[Elise73]

Well, I'll begin the trend of drama scripts with my MW and RS. Post up guys! I won't be judgemental, and I don't think anyone else here is either. criticism is welcome, but don't rip it up too much...

How did you go with it in the hsc?

 

[fleepbasding]

50/50- 8th in the state

 

[ezaweirdo]

hay gorgo or something-i did a theatre script to are you finding it difficult because i am-i just don't know if its qnygood or not-but hay whats yours about

 

[fleepbasding]

hay gorgo or something-i did a theatre script to are you finding it difficult because i am-i just don't know if its qnygood or not-but hay whats yours about

gorgo did the HSC last year. You can read his major work by going to the "Showcase" thread in the main ext 2 forum, it is located there.

If you want extra help for your play, maybe you should consider getting some tutoring... from me! haha, if you're interested you can click some of the links below (in my signature).