Akhenatn Foreiegn policy, LF feedback (1 Viewer)

[nickluvschool]

hey guys this is my response to a possible 10 mark question a will be recieving on monday, its on akhenaten's foriegn policy. its not answering any specific question just a basic summary and why he participated in foriegn affairs etc.

I would greatly appreciate some feedback.

thanks heaps in advance!!

 

[xlil-miss-muffx]

hey i read your answer...

it's not too bad...but you won't get a ten if this is your answer in hsc...you've got no historians...one or two should be enough for a ten mark question. Other than that, it's all good

hope that helps!