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Discovery is a process which everyone goes through, to uncover hidden abilities and differences which are experienced in various ways. ‘Life of Pi’, dramatic film captures the idea of discovering hidden abilities whilst also drawing focus to the will to live and symbols commonly used. Poem ‘Cut’, focusing on the same ideas, produces ambiguous variations and meanings towards the process of discovery. Both texts personas feature transformations where they uncover hidden agendas and reconsider what was lost and know found.

‘Life of Pi’ is a film directed by Ang Lee in 2012 focusing on the needs and passion towards survival. As Pi undergoes perilous journeys, he makes spiritual, physical and emotional discoveries. Throughout the move it is known that Pi’s religious beliefs draw on his need for survival. Whilst attempting to train Richard Parker on the life raft, to claim dominance, a long shot is used to feature both primitive characters circling while there is a contrast between the sea. This focus point of the sea elaborates on how loneliness and desperation had deprived and forces Pi’s transformation from a young anxious boy to a intrepid man. Ang Lee uses the characters stance to show how dominance plays a key role in transformation and discovering hidden abilities.

Sylvia Plaths ‘Cut’ written in 1962, targets the ambiguous audience during the 60’s who wanted to break from the women socialistic ideals. Featuring first person narration which incorporates ten stanzas, this poem elaborates on how Plaths suicidal agendas derive from constricted feelings of being an educated women in a restricted society where women were subjugated towards being housewife’s. The quote “Out of a gap, a million soldiers run” is reinforced with imagery to connect to Plaths context of her husband’s use of adultery as she felt the urge of suicide Plath constantly reconsiders what is known as she always ventured to the real of suicide. From this quote, the hyperbole elaborates on the fickleness this urge brings once it feels alright the in suddenly disperses into depression. ‘Cut’ is a mysterious poem which powerfully incorporates the will to live as well as discovering hidden potential competence.

Ang Lee addresses symbols frequently in ‘Life of Pi’ which represent various meanings that help Pi in his transformation. As Pi has a strong spiritual connection, he is able to adapt to his new environments with the help of Richard Parker. It is clearly evident that the water represents loneliness, while the life raft provides hope albeit religious faith is the main focus. The mysterious island represents the Christian Garden of Eden and Orange, a frequent colour possesses survival qualities. There is a sense of spiritual discovery from the symbolic metaphor of the tooth featured at the mysterious island. This scene incorporates Christian spiritual connections to the garden of Eden providing a heaven and hell contrast against the day and night of the island, which is alluded through the switching between long and extreme close shots. As Ang Lee highlights Pi’s adaption to discovery, he rediscovers his spiritual beliefs.

Various types of Symbols are incorporated in Plaths works which feature issues towards her troubled marriage, unresolved conflicts with parents and her personal vision of herself. The poem being an extended metaphor, entices the audience drawing ambiguous conclusions to Plaths exploration of self. Phallic Symbol is used in line two of the poem when the speaker says “My thumb instead of an onion” assassinating with male dominance which was being exhibited. The symbolic metaphor incorporated in “saboteur, Kamikaze man” uses censura to insure the power of depression and self destruction is highlighted through the kamikaze suicidal nature which was always apparent to her.

The transformation which is evident in everybody’s process of discovery, involved uncovering hidden and known desires. Through symbolism and the will to live, both texts ‘Life of Pi’ and ‘Cut’ features personas who struggle against this process, though achieve self discovery and transform to higher perspectives.


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you need to have opening topic sentences before diving into your texts for each paragraph :)
 

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Ahahah how did you find me mate... Im from ATAR notes aswell..

I tried to integrate the text and Idea so there was no time wastage
 

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riiiight, your call, i would make sure i have an opening sentence reiterating my thesis (especially for the first 2 paragraphs)
 

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Is this a bit better?:

Discovery is a process which everyone goes through, to uncover hidden abilities and differences which are experienced in diversified ways including constant struggles and challenges. Ang Lee's dramatic film ‘Life of Pi' (2012) captures the idea of discovering hidden abilities whilst also drawing focus to the will to live. Sylvia Plath's 1962 poem ‘Cut’, focuses on the assertion of abilities, justifying its process of discovery whilst commenting on the symbolic subject of mortality. Both texts personas feature transformations where they uncover hidden agendas and reconsider what was lost and now found.

Through surpassing boundaries and attempting perilous journeys, the exploration of the physical, spiritual and emotional can be assessed by transformation. As Pi undergoes perilous journeys, he makes spiritual, physical and emotional discoveries, such as the unique relationship between animal and man whilst also exploring the concept of mortality being an ambiguous phenomenon . Self discovery is explored towards the middle of the film as Throughout the film it is conveyed that Pi’s religious beliefs draw on his need for survival which displays his use of spiritual discoveries and the many beliefs included in each. Lee's use of a long shot accentuates the competition for dominance between Parker and Pi, with the sea representing how loneliness and desperation has forced the physical and emotion transformation of the persona. Ang Lee uses the characters stance to show how dominance plays a key role in transformation and discovering hidden abilities. MORE ANALYSIS NEEDED

Plath commonly explores the ambiguous notion of societal ideals for women, relating to her audience during the 60’s who wanted to expedite away from these Ideals. Featuring first person narration which incorporates ten stanzas, this poem elaborates on how Plath's suicidal agendas derive from constricted feelings of being an educated women in a restricted society analysing where women were subjugated towards being housewives. On contemplating her bleeding theme, the persona muses “Out of a gap, a million soldiers run", Imagery connecting Plath's context of her husband’s adultery as she felt the urge of suicide Plath's persona constantly reconsiders what is known as she always ventured to the option of suicide. From this complex imagery of welfare, the hyperbole elaborates on the fickleness this urge brings once it feels alright the in suddenly disperses into depression. ‘Cut’ is a mysterious poem which powerfully incorporates the will to live as well as discovering hidden potential competence.

Ang Lee utilises symbols frequently in ‘Life of Pi’ focusing on the ambiguous meanings of hurdles in Pi's transformation, allowing him to explore a range of perceptions. As Pi has a strong spiritual connection, he is able to adapt to his new environments with the help of Richard Parker. Through symbolic imagery It is clearly evident that the use of water, represents loneliness, while the life raft provides hope albeit religious faith is the main focus. The mysterious island represents the biblical allusion of the Christian Garden of Eden and Orange, a frequent colour possesses survival qualities. There is a sense of spiritual discovery from the symbolic metaphor of the tooth featured at the mysterious island, not being a voluntary transformation, Pi remembers his Christian values as well as animalistic qualities. This scene incorporates Christian spiritual connections to the garden of Eden providing a heaven and hell contrast against the day and night of the island, which is alluded through the switching between long and extreme close shots, Showing the audience the features of a religious exploration. As Ang Lee highlights Pi’s adaption to discovery, he rediscovers his spiritual beliefs.

Various types of Symbols are incorporated in Plath's works which feature issues towards her troubled marriage, unresolved conflicts with parents and her personal vision of herself. The poem being an extended metaphor, entices the audience drawing ambiguous conclusions to Plath's exploration of self. For example, the simple symbolic notion of "blood" represents assorted meanings such as genetics, life force and family/personal history. Phallic Symbol is used in line two of the poem when the speaker says “My thumb instead of an onion” assassinating with male dominance which was prevalent. The symbolic metaphor incorporated in “saboteur, Kamikaze man” uses censurae to insure the power of depression and self destruction is highlighted through the kamikaze suicidal nature which was always apparent to her. From the numerous symbols included in "Cut", Plath successfully conveys her exploration on idealistic views of how social constraint has a pessimistic effect on women.

The transformation which is evident in everybody’s process of discovery, involved uncovering hidden and known desires. 'Life of Pi' reflects the transformation of a child whose inevitable responsibility is to grow up, being available through continuous challenges along his journey. The persona from 'Cut' experiences something for the first time which is revealed to have negatively influenced her, making the discovery that traitorous "blood" represents the fickle relationship between herself and husband, a common misconception of the 60's. As both of these texts relate to personal transformation, they also distinguish ideas of graphic symbolism and the need for a chance to live.
 

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