Anyone able to give me feedback on my Module A essay? (1 Viewer)

[Lilabear]

Hey guys,

i'm mostly concerned on my essay structure, not so much the contents of what i've written. Let me know if any of you all are able to have a look over it and ill PM you

 

[Drongoski]

But isn't your English tutor, whom you have paid a fair bit, the one to do this? Or have you terminated her?

 

[Lilabear]

She's overseas, very unfortunate timing :/