anyone want to read and/or give feedback on my utopia creative? (1 Viewer)

[stickyricebuns]

for our 3u english we have to write a creative based on the idea of utopia and a quote that we use as a stimulus or a prompt. i'd really like it if anyone could give me feedback on my creative, thank you !

i'll message you if anyone wants to read it )

 

[golden-touch]

sure ill have a read

 

[vivillon]

Hi! I'm doing 3u eng as well. I'd love to read it if it's still relevant :v

 

[EpicNoob]

for our 3u english we have to write a creative based on the idea of utopia and a quote that we use as a stimulus or a prompt. i'd really like it if anyone could give me feedback on my creative, thank you !

i'll message you if anyone wants to read it )

sure i will read it if you want

 

[brysonejh]

I'll read it