Belonging short story (1 Viewer)

[adamcg]

Have a read I'm not looking for an in depth analysis, just overall impressions.

but if you feel compelled...

Thank you XD

 

[adamcg]

PS, plagerism is an evil sin and you will burn in hell under the firey eyes of board of studies officials for it...:burn:

 

[Jackie.bored]

very interesting story. Good. =)
some spelling mistakes. 'realy' 'minuet' 'to'
a really interesting idea and it really keeps the reader wanting to read on. The structure of it is good.

 

[Ellis Cureton]

I like it. Only i think the markers would HATE the fact that it wsa all a dream...awful resolution. What school are you writing this for? Ive got the same assessment on monday.