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How did you guys use that quote? Did you just use it at the beginning or refer back to it or what..

I only used it in my intro and didn't talk about it again. Not sure whether that was a good idea now..
 

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ally66pr1nc3ss6 said:
How did you guys use that quote? Did you just use it at the beginning or refer back to it or what..

I only used it in my intro and didn't talk about it again. Not sure whether that was a good idea now..
lol i did the same as u. i just had at the beginning of my intro.. said something about it and linked it back to the texts. i never really referred back to it again in my essay.

however, in my opinion: the main 'meat' of the question was the part about how consideration is invited of humanity's connection with the natural world.
 

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ally66pr1nc3ss6 said:
How did you guys use that quote? Did you just use it at the beginning or refer back to it or what..

I only used it in my intro and didn't talk about it again. Not sure whether that was a good idea now..
Used it in my intro and linked my concepts to it a couple of times.

It was to be used as a starting point for comparison. Dont stress.
 

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sonyaleeisapixi said:
Used it in my intro and linked my concepts to it a couple of times.

It was to be used as a starting point for comparison. Dont stress.
aaah Sonya.. how'd u go today? I haven't come across any of ur 'thoughts' posts today. :)
 

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The question told you to use it as a starting point, that's it.
 

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danz90 said:
aaah Sonya.. how'd u go today? I haven't come across any of ur 'thoughts' posts today. :)
Hello! =d

I though todays paper was a gift, for my modules at least. No change in text type, and very open, clear and confusion free questions.

As I predicted, they wanted this phase of HSC English modules to go out with a bang. Results this year will be pretty solid.
 

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sonyaleeisapixi said:
Hello! =d

I though todays paper was a gift, for my modules at least. No change in text type, and very open, clear and confusion free questions.

As I predicted, they wanted this phase of HSC English modules to go out with a bang. Results this year will be pretty solid.
let's hope the results are solid :) but im sure that's not a problem for u.. i don't doubt u raped it silly.
 

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let's hope the results are solid :) but im sure that's not a problem for u.. i don't doubt u raped it silly.
I basically made Harwood, Sitchelal, Huxey and Scott my bitches.
=d
 

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I didnt use it in the introduction because in my half yearlys we were given a quote, and when I opened with that quote the marker said it was bad essay technique.

But I pretty much brought it up the entire way through, begining all my issues with some reference to the quote
 

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It was in my first page of analysis. My introduction just considered of the actual 'question', (not writing it but you know, what I considered).

The first page of my analysis used the quote as a 'starting point' which eventually went into broader things then to BR. So. Yeah. I'm pretty sure it wasn't meant to be a 'central' thing.
 

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Yeah, it was only for a starting point, the question was more about the connection. Even if you didn't mention it at all, and talked about humanity connection with nature, you'll be fine.
 

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I dunno how i'll go as far as the quote's concerned. I got through to my first body paragraph and went "shite, I haven't included that quote yet" so I mentioned it there and never spoke of it again. Bleh.
 

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Yeah, I never even mentioned the quote lol. But I'm pretty sure I talked about humanity's connection with nature a lot so I should be fine, I hope.
 

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yeah opened with the quote, made no reference to it in my essay and just talked about the relationship between humanity and nature,

it said starting point so fuck it.
 

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i used it in one of my paragraphs when talking about characters and their disconnection with nature.

i didnt think it necesary to include in the introduction....
 

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used it as a starting point, referred to it as 'anaphoric cataloguing', then used that as the basis for a thesis to show how happiness is an existential venture..

oh yeh, i prolly said 'humanity's relationship with nature' about 20 times. hooray for rotelearned essays :(
 

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I referred to it in my introduction and conclusion, and loosely interwoved it through my points in the essay.
 

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