Can anyone mark/give feedback on my poetry for Mod C? (1 Viewer)

[katiekms]

Hi everyone, for Module C we had to create a response to the stimulus “the primary concern of good text is to create an emotional response in the reader”. I chose to do a poem.

Is anyone willing to read over my poem and mark and give feedback on how to improve? keep in mind this is literally the first time i’ve written any poetry and it’s on a personal topic so just keep that in mind please.

If anyone is happy to do it, comment and i’ll DM you it!

Thank you!

 

[katiekms]

please people i’m desperate, my teacher is on leave literally until the day before it’s due so i kinda need help