Can somebody read my short story? Thanks (1 Viewer)

[cricketfan1997]

As above? I'll PM it to you. Thanks

 

[Omed62]

yes, I would love to help you, I am currently in my final in year of HSC.

what is it that you really need help with !

let me tell you something lol,

English I am good at it, I get like low 90% this year since I work extremely hard. ur in year 11, right!

 

[cricketfan1997]

i cant PM you can anybody else read my story?

 

[cricketfan1997]

Bump

 

[cricketfan1997]

Bump

 

[Leffife]

Tell me two things first:
1) How long is it?
2) What is the story about?

 

[meaganxo]

I'll be happy to read it let me know what feedback you're after and we should be good! Xx