Can someone do me a favour? (1 Viewer)

[Scorch]

I just need someone to critique my short story, or what I have so far, so if someone can, would you be able to tell me and I'll email it to you.

 

[goldendawn]

hey Scorch -

I'm a 2004 EE2 student and I'd be happy to take a look at what you've got so far. My e-mail adress is marcus_tzemos@hotmail.com.

Cheers.

 

[kami]

I wouldn't mind giving it a once over if you send it - you can use e-mail or pm, you'll find both in my profile.
EDIT:Also Scorch, are you an Ext 2 English accelerant or is this for preliminary English?

 

[Scorch]

I wouldn't mind giving it a once over if you send it - you can use e-mail or pm, you'll find both in my profile.
EDIT:Also Scorch, are you an Ext 2 English accelerant or is this for preliminary English?

No I'm doing pathways, so I can split my subjects up between two years. My school said I should do this cos I was radically accellerated in primary school, so I'll end up graduating in 2007, when I'm 14.

Anyways, I'll send you guys what I have now.

 

[Emph]

I'll end up graduating in 2007, when I'm 14.

I'm confused. so you are 13yrs now but doing HSC extension 2 english?

 

[luscious-llama]

No I'm doing pathways, so I can split my subjects up between two years. My school said I should do this cos I was radically accellerated in primary school, so I'll end up graduating in 2007, when I'm 14.

Anyways, I'll send you guys what I have now.

Hey there's like another person your age (a year younger, so what) who's also doing the HSC..but not by pathways...

I'd like a read of your short story, PM me, i'm also doing one. Funfunfun.

 

[Scorch]

I'm confused. so you are 13yrs now but doing HSC extension 2 english?

Yep that's pretty much the gist of it.

Llama, I'm busy working on my report part for my proposal (due tommorow ) But if I remember later I'll send it to you.

 

[ScottyG]

Yep that's pretty much the gist of it.

Llama, I'm busy working on my report part for my proposal (due tommorow ) But if I remember later I'll send it to you.

13? Just the sound of it is impressive, good luck with your proposal by the way.

 

[Hermzie]

You can pm or email it to me and I'll be more than happy to critique it for you. My email is Traceyrei@hotmail.com

 

[luscious-llama]

Yep that's pretty much the gist of it.

Llama, I'm busy working on my report part for my proposal (due tommorow ) But if I remember later I'll send it to you.

Yayyyyyyy