CHANGE... help? (1 Viewer)

[mei_ling03]

could anyone recommend (or send) me a good change essay? or just tell me good points for inclusion? no matter what i do i never improve and it's meant to be the easiest part of the course! ..it seems any amount of preparation i do is unsuccessful

 

[tieki]

I don't know if it's the easiest part of the course (change as a whole, that is), because it's worth more than the other section (relatively...anyway ). Which particular change are you doing - self, perspective or worlds? There might be some good stuff on the main site...have a look at the English section there for some stuff...

Ah...just realised, post stuff about change in the AOS forum next time...

 

[mei_ling03]

what's the AOS forum?

i'm doing changing self.. i had a quick look at the stuff in the Eng section but it wasn't really much use, altho i didn't get to go through them all
i'd just like to know whether anyone has a good preparation structure for essays

 

[Rahul]

http://www.boredofstudies.org/community/forumdisplay.php?s=&daysprune=&forumid=44

you may want to try out the board of studies site and download band 5/6 essays from there.

 

[hipsta_jess]

i guess theres no clear cut formula, but this is what i do:
introduction



paragraph about (for me, doing changing worlds) technological changes, introducing my texts

paragraph about core text for technological changes

paragraph on stimulus/extra on technological changes



paragraph about social changes, introducing my texts

paragraph about core text for social changes

paragraph on stimulus/extra on social changes



paragraph about language changes, introducing my texts

paragraph about core text for language changes

paragraph on stimulus/extra on language changes



conclusion



so..yeah, thats what i follow, and it works for me, i get around 17-20/20 for all my essays..but also try to increase your volcabulary and relate all your paragraphs back to the question..

 

[iambored]

u c i do mine the other way

intro

paragraph on 1st tect (how it shows change etc.)

paragraph on 2nd text

etc.

conclusion

 

[BlackJack]

AOS - Area of Study. Though, I can't move this over there.