Changing Perspective English help (1 Viewer)

[dougieblow]

try doing American History X. Short plot : is about a skinhead changing his perspective towards negroes, plus its an awesome movie too.

 

[Aerath]

But it answers the question correctly just not as detailed as what it could be?

It answers the question. However, it doesn't showcase your talent in terms of sophistication and flair.

 

[Aplus]

But it answers the question correctly just not as detailed as what it could be?

No, it's not detailed at all. If it's an essay, then you've got a long way to go.

 

[Twickel]

Hi
This is for an interview im trying to keep it simple so I can remember what I am writing.

I added some quotes.

 

[Aerath]

Hi
This is for an interview im trying to keep it simple so I can remember what I am writing.

I added some quotes.

That's quite a big chunk for one person to say in an interview. Generally speaking, the host shouldn't be asking that long a question, and the responder shouldn't be talking that much, without prompting from the host. Interviews also need continuity.

 

[Aplus]

If it's an interview it has to be colloquial and natural to some extent. No one undertakes a conversation with a tone which suggests that they are reading an essay.