Could somebody please read my creative? (1 Viewer)

[Lucas_]

Hi

Just wondering if anybody could have a read of my creative (hopefully somebody who has already done the HSC) and tell me what you think?

I currently think it's maybe a 9-10/15. I would really appreciate if you could also provide a rough mark.

Send me a private message through this system with your email and I'll send it straight through! Thanks

EDIT: Sorry for double thread, not sure which forum it belongs in!

 

[ExcelHSC]

I will be more than happy.

 

[barbernator]

I will be more than happy.

you are a gentleman and a scholar! this kid is ahead of me in english so don't mark it too well

 

[Lucas_]

Thanks for reading that for me Excell!

I hope you enjoyed it

 

[ExcelHSC]

I did, no problems.
Thanks for letting me read it