Could someone please read my creative writing - Belonging :) (2 Viewers)

[Suuup2]

Hi
If anyone is willing to read my creative writing for belonging could you please PM me

* preferably someone who has already completed HSC

Thaankyou

 

[obliviousninja]

I wish I could. But I am extremely busy with uni at the moment.

Is there anything particular your are unsure about and/or not confident with?

 

[faisalabdul16]

I think it's better to show it to your teacher

 

[astroman]

should pm strawberrye

 

[Suuup2]

That's okay, thanks for your offer anyway

Well, I'd say creative writing is my absolute weakness in HSC, and I haven't put in the effort I should have for it. But I've written this one that I personally kinda like, I just need someone else's opinion on it, and whether it makes sense.

I describe an anonymous character who feels intimidated by a particular colleague, and she wants to make her way up to her position, she goes through ranges of emotions etc. But there's a twist to the story that, the anonymous character is just a child who goes through the usual stresses of childhood i.e. wanting to be the group leader amongst her friends. And the scenario of a workplace is just her everyday life at school

 

[Suuup2]

should pm strawberrye

Thankyou, will do

 

[Suuup2]

I think it's better to show it to your teacher

I've sent it to her, but she says she's too busy atm and I'll most likely get it back the day of HSC :'(

 

[astroman]

I've sent it to her, but she says she's too busy atm and I'll most likely get it back the day of HSC :'(

maybe another teacher from ur school?

 

[Suuup2]

maybe another teacher from ur school?

I've tried, none of them respond to my emails

 

[faisalabdul16]

I've sent it to her, but she says she's too busy atm and I'll most likely get it back the day of HSC :'(

ask her if she's stupid or dumb

 

[SuchSmallHands]

Your teacher sounds like mine, most of my class has sent her practice essays and creatives and she basically told them 'if you don't know how to do it a month before the HSC you're clearly not going to do well anyway, so why would I waste my time?'

 

[strawberrye]

should pm strawberrye

Thank you for the recommendation, unfortunately I am extremely overloaded with uni work at the moment so I will not have time to look over any writing or answer any private questions about the impending HSC through PM. I apologise for any inconvenience caused and seek OP's understanding. Best wishes to the OP for acing their HSC

 

[Smelly Cat]

lol make sure the people you send your story to aren't current year 12's in desperate need of a new story one day before the exam ...