Creative writing help! (1 Viewer)

[L]

Hey guys,

My teacher suggested i improve on my idea/theme for the creative writing part of the english exam paper.

so far its just about me going 2 schoolies getting blind drunk n cruzin round pickin up chicks

its like really descriptive and deep and i even threw in afew metafors to the real world about women and portrayl of societal matters with regard to feminism and the modern man

can u guys help me improve it or maybe giv me sum more ideas please?

thanks in advance.

 

[L]

oh, and my uai aim is 97.85

 

[Mind-Revolution]

Ensure the tone is evidently sexist and racist for B6.

 

[bugboy]

Do you need a UAI to pick up chicks
:rofl:

 

[L]

bump.

my teacher said it might need some work for the HSC