Creative writing (1 Viewer)

[anthony-yo]

Hi, so with creative writing, my scores have been pretty good (like 13 & 14), but there's this girl in my class who always gets 15, and her writing is like mostly description with a good plot, like it all works, but I wanted to know if you guys had any advice to increasing my use of description, b/c im really at loss of how i can.

 

[nd16]

What is your story about?

 

[anthony-yo]

its varies cause of the source, but its for the belonging module