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hey....shuld u use lyk a creative writting ender...lyk a last line for a lasting impression...

lyk...." alas...alas"

its a sad story?
 

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If you're asking a question about an English paper, you should at least make an attempt to use proper english when asking it.
 

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grr...kkkz....my fault with my broken ethnic english....

say ur writting a creative writting, or u have memorised one....is it effective (in terms of marks) to hav a good ending last line....to lyk leave and impression on the marker....

e.g. alas alas...(its that word they use in old english literature, goes with my olden day story)
 

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Triple777ER said:
"i woke up and it was all a dream"
It was all a dream
I used to read Word Up magazine
Salt'n'Pepa and Heavy D up in the limousine
Hangin' pictures on my wall
Every Saturday Rap Attack, Mr. Magic, Marley Marl
I let my tape rock 'til my tape popped
Smokin' weed and bamboo, sippin' on private stock
Way back, when I had the red and black lumberjack
With the hat to match
Remember Rappin' Duke, duh-ha, duh-ha
You never thought that hip hop would take it this far
Now I'm in the limelight 'cause I rhyme tight
Time to get paid, blow up like the World Trade
Born sinner, the opposite of a winner
Remember when I used to eat sardines for dinner
Peace to Ron G, Brucey B, Kid Capri
Funkmaster Flex, Lovebug Starsky
I'm blowin' up like you thought I would
Call the crib, same number same hood
It's all good
 

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Fathers said:
It was all a dream
I used to read Word Up magazine
Salt'n'Pepa and Heavy D up in the limousine
Hangin' pictures on my wall
Every Saturday Rap Attack, Mr. Magic, Marley Marl
I let my tape rock 'til my tape popped
Smokin' weed and bamboo, sippin' on private stock
Way back, when I had the red and black lumberjack
With the hat to match
Remember Rappin' Duke, duh-ha, duh-ha
You never thought that hip hop would take it this far
Now I'm in the limelight 'cause I rhyme tight
Time to get paid, blow up like the World Trade
Born sinner, the opposite of a winner
Remember when I used to eat sardines for dinner
Peace to Ron G, Brucey B, Kid Capri
Funkmaster Flex, Lovebug Starsky
I'm blowin' up like you thought I would
Call the crib, same number same hood
It's all good
bay-beh
bay-beh
 

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forgot about him lol

he's a sickcunt
can't wait to try out that rooster move hhah
 

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If you like failing english, then go ahead with "it was all a dream ending" but if you want goods marks, a creative ending is useful. The endings are usually interesting, and ambiguous so it makes the examier/reader think of what will happen next and such
 

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