kevinx2
.
- Joined
- Aug 3, 2008
- Messages
- 2,110
- Gender
- Male
- HSC
- 2008
Real good of you -tal- for going to so much effort to help *thumbs up*
I read a bit more of your draft, not all of it sorry it's looking good except with your tenses, you switch between past and present tense quite a lot. I'm having the same problem as well, and im fixing it right now
Again GoodLuckies
I read a bit more of your draft, not all of it sorry it's looking good except with your tenses, you switch between past and present tense quite a lot. I'm having the same problem as well, and im fixing it right now
Again GoodLuckies