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[Daza]

Hey can soemone check if I've address this dot oint in the right way? and for the second dot point I'm not sure what to write about

 Contemporary struggles for human rights
The detention of illegal immigrant is a breach on the constitution law and international human rights. In the constitution it states the government’s job is to ‘ensure the liberties that we as free people promote’. The government is not ensuring this liberty towards these illegal refugees. In light of protest form the public and international pressures, the Australian government has ratified the convention on the Status of Refugees. Although the government has done this, illegal immigrants are still in these detention centres waiting for up to 4 to 5 years for their application for citizenship to be processed. There is also a breach of the Convention on the Rights of Children as every child under 15 must go to school in Australia.

 the changing understanding of human rights and the effectiveness of legal measures both domestically and internationally in addressing human rights issues.

 

[goan_crazy]

 the changing understanding of human rights and the effectiveness of legal measures both domestically and internationally in addressing human rights issues.

the first one is right

2nd is exactly what it asks
u have to EVALUATE the effectiveness of the measures in addressing that issue u did as well as others
and how it protects human rights.

 

[Daza]

Please Elaborate

So by that do you mean like I say the legal systme is not being effective because

domestically-not protecting the rights of these refugees, and

internationally - the UN can not really say anything to Australia to tell it to do something because of 'state soverignty' and

prob inclusion of the international convention on the rights of refugees. Is this on the right track? If not PM back please.

 

[goan_crazy]

Its whatever u think it is
U mite think some things are effective
where others may think its ineffective

this isnt syllabus stuff really, its YOUR opinion and how u say it.
Just back it up with the facts
and remember to evaluate