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danthor

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Hey guys.

My teacher has set me a task to write a Feature article about 2 skryznecki poems and 1 support material in relation to journeys. I am a bit stuck on this seeing as I have written an essay in my book and handed that in. Thsi only resulted in a letter home and a non-award warning:bomb:Any tips on writing one would be very helpful, cheers.
 

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My english teacher said you can transform an essay into a feature article by using features of a feature article such as informal and sometimes emotive language and other things you would find in a feature article. You consult magazines or newspapers to find out what they are like and convert your essay into one.
 

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Personally I haven't tried writing a feature article myself, but I have some notes on studying feature articles...which I'm not sure if they'll help but I'll post them anyway


Conventions to consider when studying a feature article

1. What does it say? (content)
  • What is the subject?
  • What are the main events of the story or the main purpose of the arguement?
  • What are the central meanings? What are the central concerns? With what problem or conflict does it deal with and with what outcome?
  • Are several themes woven together?
  • Are the themes universal or perennial ones? Can you link them with the themes of any other writing? Are they linked with the concerns of the author's times? Or ours? How important are the themes?
2. What is it trying to do? (aim)
  • Inform us?
  • Persuade us?
  • Stimulate our imagination? Make us feel as the author feels about scenes, incidents and people?
  • Challenge us?
  • Criticize certain aspects of the world?
  • Who is the target audience?
3. How is it written? (style and positioning devices)
  • What is the standpoint form from which it is written? Point of view?
  • If it is a piece of argument or exposition, is it written using the first or third person point of view? What effect does this have?
  • If it is a story, is it in the:
    - First person as participant?
    - First person as observer?
    - Third Person as participant?
    - Third person as omniscient - but limited to one individual?
    - Third person as camera eye?
  • What effect does this have on the way it is written?
  • Is the writing primarily objective or subjective? Does it exclude or reveal the feelings and attitudes of the writer? Is it a mixture of the two?
  • What level of language is used - formal, colloquial or slang? Is it a mixture of these? Could it best be described as semi-formal or informal? Is there a use of jargon?
  • What kind of language is used?
    - Straight forward?
    - Literal?
    - Coloured and emotive?
    - Unfavourable/favourable
    - Tone of words and phrases used?
    - Is there a significant use of figurative language (similes, metaphors, personification, sensory imagery)
    - Sound devices such as alliteration and onomatopoeia>
    - Irony, puns
    - Direct comparisons - similes, and indirect comparisons- metaphors, invite the reader to make certain associations which are powerful positioning devices
    - Is there use of symbolism, allusion or contrast?
  • How are the senetences constructed?
    - Long, short, simple or complex?
    - Are they all statements or is use made of rhetorical questions, exclamations or orders?
    - What effect does the sentence structure have on the writing? Speed it up, slow it down, give variety?
    - Does it use repetition of words or phrases or even of particular sentence shapes?
    - Use of punctuation or exclamatory sentences
  • Are the paragraphs long or short and what is the effect of this?
  • Does the passage make use of factual data? Statistics? Graphs?
  • Does it refer to and/or quote from experts?
4. What does it tell us about the writers attitude?
  • What can we tell from the content - what has been said which indicates approval or disapproval, praise or criticism, sympathy or intolerance, or, is the detail omitted significant?
  • What can we tell from the style? - A plain, straight forward, objective style will usually indicate a neutral or balanced attitude. Whereas, a more coloured, subjective style immediately introduces bias in a direction
  • Which values and attitudes does the passage position the reader to criticise and reject; endorse and accept?
  • What is the approach?
    - Emotive (subjective)
    - Scientific (objective, based on fact, no personal opinions)
    - Blends (mixture) or both emotive and scientific
  • Didactic = more fact than opinion, purpose is to instruct
  • Persuasive = has more opinion than fact, purpose is to persuade
  • Propaganda = lies, false information or distortion of facts, purpose is to persuade
5. How is it constructed? (structure - how are the main parts of the passage related to one another and to the whole?)
  • Logically? (a feature of argument)
    - Is it a statement followed by reasons, examples or a definition, or is it a statement of cause and effect? Or perhaps it is a question followed by an answer?
  • Topically? (a feature of description and exposition)
    - Are the various aspects of the subject treated in turn? The order may be arbitary but it may be engineered to produce a pattern of some kind, or it may be a contrast
  • Chronologically? (a feature of narration)
    - Are the events described in the order in which they occurred, or perhaps there is some departure from the normal time sequence eg. a flash back?
    6. Is the passage successful as a whole? (effect)
  • Has the writer succeeded in their aim?
  • Which aspects of the writing contribute to the success or lack of it?
  • Can you make any useful comparisons with another piece of writing?
  • What effects does it have on you?
Hopefully it was some help to some people? =P Hopefully my english teacher wont notice that her notes are now on the internet
 
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sourlemong said:
Personally I haven't tried writing a feature article myself, but I have some notes on studying feature articles...which I'm not sure if they'll help but I'll post them anyway


Hopefully my teacher wont notice that her notes are now on the internet
I don't think I would be worried about that, seeing as though they are crap notes, they consists of questions and does not explain much... I am sorry, but I did not find this helpful, I am just trying to work out how to contruct this thing. :(
 

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my journeys assessment last term was a feature article. i did imagiantive journeys so my article wouldn't be very helpful, i did pretty well in it so some advice:
  • have an interesting beginning! don't have an intro like an essay, start with an anecdote or, since its physical journeys, u could start by describing a road trip or something and lead in to your thesis about these types of journeys.
  • be opinionated, don't be scared to say I.
  • make the tone casual, try to eliminate essay words like 'hence' and 'therefore.' If you can, make some jokes.
  • But don't feel u have to explain the plot of all your texts - assume your article is in a magazine about english in nsw and its being read by teachers, ppl who know the texts.
  • Remember to include a snappy title, like a pun or something - i lost marks cos i forgot :( and include pictures with captions to make it more interesting. feel free to use columns, but this can make it difficult to read/mark on a4 paper.

ok thats all i can think of right now - basically write an essay, using your teacher's suggested structure - remember to link texts! - then change the inrtoduction and word choice, remember you're writing an entertainment piece for your audience, not an essay. oh and like someone else said, read other articles to get the idea - the good weekend (from weekend syd morning herald) is a great place to start.
 

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WouldbeDoctor said:
I don't think I would be worried about that, seeing as though they are crap notes, they consists of questions and does not explain much... I am sorry, but I did not find this helpful, I am just trying to work out how to contruct this thing. :(
Well I'm utterly sorry about them not being helpful. I did mention that they were for studying a feature article and not giving a spoonfeeding session on how to write them.
 

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danthor said:
Hey guys.

My teacher has set me a task to write a Feature article about 2 skryznecki poems and 1 support material in relation to journeys. I am a bit stuck on this seeing as I have written an essay in my book and handed that in. Thsi only resulted in a letter home and a non-award warning:bomb:Any tips on writing one would be very helpful, cheers.
As a current HSC teacher of English (and modern history) I suggest very strongly that you heed the advice given by soulemong who has got it sp[ot on. The information is exactly whjat you need and if you know your work you should be able to use it. Dont be too quick to write it off there's some good stuff there. Have another look and if you still have difficulties send me a private email and I'll try and help a bit more.

Mr Ian McAlpin
 

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Hey guys.

My teacher has set me a task to write a Feature article about 2 skryznecki poems and 1 support material in relation to journeys. I am a bit stuck on this seeing as I have written an essay in my book and handed that in. Thsi only resulted in a letter home and a non-award warning:bomb:Any tips on writing one would be very helpful, cheers.



ok hi wer doin feature articles @ skul now and this wat our teacher told us:
u need an eye-catching headline, an intro to the topic, the development of the topic and a conclusion. all of these use emotive, technica, descriptive and persuasive language. you need to have a bias. and the language is subjective. :type: hope this helps 4 the future :partygirl:
 

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ok hi wer doin feature articles @ skul now and this wat our teacher told us:
u need an eye-catching headline, an intro to the topic, the development of the topic and a conclusion. all of these use emotive, technica, descriptive and persuasive language. you need to have a bias. and the language is subjective. :type: hope this helps 4 the future :partygirl:
Yeah, the only thing about this 'helping for the future' is that OP is like....3 years in the past.
 
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Max revive much, should really save them for elite 4 or champion man
 

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