Feedback on English story (2 Viewers)

[weirddivine]

thank you

 

[greenie1113]

what story??

 

[weirddivine]

haha sorry its there now

 

[greenie1113]

lol kay kwl

 

[mitchell.j.bell]

That's an interesting link to belonging...

You can't really manipulate that if they throw you a curveball...

 

[weirddivine]

ah yeh ive been worried about that, lets hope they dont haha

 

[Aerath]

It's not wise to put your creative writing....there's some desperate people trawling through this site.

 

[greenie1113]

i liked it
i thought it was pretty good lol

but im not sure the markers will like the swearing =/