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[newnoise]

Hey people,
Doing an assessment task involving the sulphate content in lawn fertiliser.
This is my write up excluding the conclusion. any feedback would be great!

 

[Spark_Coaching]

Its all really good, just make the hypothesis sound more professional, you don't need to mention it is a guess because that is what a hypothesis is.

Also in the Discussion include some information on Accuracy, Reliability and Validity and Some possible solutions to the problems encountered.