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[FesuY]

If you want to, could anyone give me feedback on this essay? Its due today, and before I submit it, I just wanna see if theres anything i can do to improve and or fix. Thanks

 

[may22]

Ff you want to, could anyone give me feedback on this essay? Its due today, and before I submit it, I just wanna see if theres anything i can do to improve and or fix. Thanks

I’m not doing MoV for year 12, but I’ve studied it a couple of years ago. I could PM you some general feedback if you want?

 

[FesuY]

I’m not doing MoV for year 12, but I’ve studied it a couple of years ago. I could PM you some general feedback if you want?

Thankyou, that will be great