goldenchild3000
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sure steven
hey its wonderful that everyone thinks you're awesome, but boasting can get irritating sometimes...campersdemise said:geez! HOW EASY WAS THAT!!!!
Haha i guess my HSC preparation of 12 hours plus a day really paid off. Anyway, i did 8, 10 and 10 pages each. I'm a bit dissappointed cause i write really small, and if i used bigger handwriting, i could of done maybe 35+? I think so anyway.
For section 2, it is in my firm belief that an outlined thesis conjuction of the metaphysical elements of the body and soul to that of the landscape is pivotal to success. In my response, i drew upon the closeness of the the poem to that of Margret Atwood. Anyone here who wants to get halfway decent should of wrote about that. Shame on those who didnt.
Band 6 FTW.
As a final note, i should add rh is n00b.
okay, you know what? i hate you. because you sound way too intelligent for your own good and your story sounded awesome and if all that is true then i am intensely jealous of you. and you just destroyed all illusions that i had of myself as intelligent.spadijer said:Section 1, was simple, allowing you to discuss metaphors, imagery, delayed denucoment, word choice ect. 11 pages.
Section 2 was evil. I propounded a postmodern narrative in a
Q: [He smiles]
A: What was it like? A dream? the golden eyes ripe with an ox-blood vision of war?
format. Basically I did a creative concept of a sea monster being conveyed in oral history. No one believes the man of his discovery of knowledge (a library of truth) within the stomach of a seamonster. Story ends with the revelation that his daughter was listening to him, and that hes blind, guiding him down the road of life. We also discover that he has gash across his face (supporting his story) - and people on the other side of the world experiencing what the man had just articulated: "Far, far away, out in the sunshine a group of fishermen were battle an estrange sea monster". 6.5 pages, medium size writing.
Section 3 was the raddest. Inner journeys clearly presented itself as a 'for' option - not only because the characters are forced to experience a series of epiphanies but because the responder also needed a sefl-realisation and reflect upon their prejudices.
Basically, I discussed the concept of growth and obstacles being a correlative factor in the inner journey - In particular, I structured my thesis based on techniques used by the composer and how they represented the concept of 'self-realisation '- and how techniques such as symbolism, contrast, pronoun shifts and a nostalgic tone were evident in all my texts.
My Place and the use of paternalist imagery, road not taken was connected to Nan: telling her story in ages and ages hence and my related text, called Summer Storm - which was about a kid coming to the self-realisation that hes...well..gay. Again correlating with the choices Frost made in life. I discussed the use of colour, rain, weather patterns, bird call motifs as metaphors for the challenges self-realisation entails and how responders we are forced to espouse the ideas being expounded. Michel Foucault was useful for this. Hence, self-realisation and admiting the nature of one self is essential in an inner journey as it leads to growth on two levels: responder and character. 10 and half pages.
I do feel sorry for people who did the physical journey, although if you propounded a thesis on the aesthetic nature of the journey and perhaps on the connection between the physical, inner and imaginative.
Well, to think of it, unless ur writing is REALLY tiny, then u did too little to get an A range response, even if it was a good quality essay. U mite not be screwed thou if those 4 pages were really good thou. If that's any consolation.sillysana said:ok...question : does it really matter how many pages you write... i mean isnt it quality not quantity...i definetly did not write 16 pages for my essay as the essence did!!! i did like 4 pages....
am i screwed??????
You must be a fool to think i was serious. Band 1 all the way~rivergumrob said:hey its wonderful that everyone thinks you're awesome, but boasting can get irritating sometimes...