Have i used this in the right context?? (1 Viewer)

[manifestation]

Hello folks,

I was wondering if anyone could tell me if i have used the word persona in the right context:

"The first stanza in the poem emphasizes the options between being confronted by the persona “two roads diverged” suggesting separation and equally different paths. Throughout the poem there is a large amount of regret present, which is apparent in the second line of the first stanza. "

Does that sound right??? Just want to make sure

Thanx
ciao

 

[iamsickofyear12]

Hello folks,

I was wondering if anyone could tell me if i have used the word persona in the right context:

"The first stanza in the poem emphasizes the options between being confronted by the persona “two roads diverged” suggesting separation and equally different paths. Throughout the poem there is a large amount of regret present, which is apparent in the second line of the first stanza. "

Does that sound right??? Just want to make sure

Thanx
ciao

Get rid of the between in "emphasizes the options between being confronted by the persona" and it will make sense.

 

[gordo]

it doesn't read very well,
put some punctuation in to make what you are trying to say more clear

 

[manifestation]

Okay thanx matey