Agreed.lizziegirl said:any story in which the character undergoes significant change for the better is a journey. like how a person's negative attitude towards a particular situation changes to a positive attitude as it is shaped by certain events...and thus he has a different perspective towards it... and grows/experiences a journey etc..
i think its easier if u focus on writing an inner journey rather than physical/imaginative.
Your effective use of language techniques were very likely to have largely contributed to your marks.upthedownstair said:i got 14/15 for that. the secret is to write with passion. you've gotta feeeeeeeeeel the character, and don't make the concept cliche. use lots of language techniques
and voila