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[Ria]

Can anyone help me with my essay? i just finished my Esl prelimary yearly and i had no idea what i did 2 my essay during the exam?! i think i must get a really bad mark for it. is it possible someone can send his/her sample 2 me, no matter what is ur essay about. i just want 2 have a look the structure etc. bty, is it true the area of study we r gona do next year is different from this year?

 

[piccaninny]

yes you will study Journey insteard of perspective. check new syllabus also ask your english teacher for standards packages, it really helps because you see exactly how marks allocated. if you find any sample essays ( i dont have any, sorry) do not read advanced english essays because they are more about creativity but esl essays is about structure. My friend writes plain, boring essays and she gets 97%+ in esl. Just remember : definition of journey, topic sentence, quote (pivotal), and how composer created it ( techniques he/ she used). Good luck!!

 

[Survivor39]

Ria, Private Message me with your E-mail, I'll try to send you one of my essays as soon as I can.

In the meantime, keep practising. Remember, it is ONLY the preliminary, you have ONE more year to go. You'll be suprised on how fast your English skill will grow and mature in one years of time.

 

[MyLuv]

To Survivor39: can U send me Ur essay too,plz??? I got 10/20 in essay for my trial(wish I can drop this crap )
ps: pmed U my Email.Thx a lot

 

[Survivor39]

If you want the essay I'm sending out, the only one available so far is the Narrative essay (one poem). Sorry. Private message me if you want that one.

Perspective, Narrative (all 3 poems) and Enlish for study will be available as soon as i find time to type them up

Make sure when you Private message me, tell me which essays you want

 

[Ria]

Thank both of you so much!

 

[Survivor39]

I have no idea who I sent essays to. Can someone tell me if you have received one?? Thanks

 

[ToRnaDo]

Hey Survivor..i got ur mail..just one paragraph of perspective essay..im waiting for ur full essay and the essay for Engglish for study . Thank you soo much for ur essays so far then! My email: white_knight1903@hotmail.com

 

[shadowRRL]

can someone send me an essay about perspective?

send it to me in private mail or something

thnx