Incomplete essay, is it any good? (1 Viewer)

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Anyone willing to have a look, give some advice, critique this unfinished essay?

 

[Jerruy]

u need 2 coleridge poems

 

[*slurtznow&4eva]

yeh pretty good, other than needing to mention 2 poems
don't retell the story so much
the markes know the story and ur being marked on your points

 

[Jerruy]

also, good luck remember all those quotes!

 

[matsabatsa]

Hi its ok some points though- you dont have to outright say "yes" to the point, I'd do a topic sentence that subtly shows the affirmative side- it creates a good impression of sophistication. Also by agreeing you restrict yourself alot- so when a question is very narrow id always try and debate it a bit so you can manipulate all your points. Also make sure you underline the name of your texts so you dont confuse them with characters or places of the same name.