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Snivesian

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Firstly, thank you for this essay guide, it truly is very helpful.

The question I have is - is it possible to structure in this following manner?

Point 1 - Resource Efficiency
Para 1: Positive (LCMR imbedded)
Para 2: Negative (LCMR imbedded)

Point 2 - Meeting Society's Needs
Para 3: Positive (LCMR imbedded)
Para 4. Negative (LCMR imbedded)

Conclusion.

Or is another point necessary? ^
 

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Firstly, thank you for this essay guide, it truly is very helpful.

The question I have is - is it possible to structure in this following manner?

Point 1 - Resource Efficiency
Para 1: Positive (LCMR imbedded)
Para 2: Negative (LCMR imbedded)

Point 2 - Meeting Society's Needs
Para 3: Positive (LCMR imbedded)
Para 4. Negative (LCMR imbedded)

Conclusion.

Or is another point necessary? ^
imo the problem with this is you are so balanced that it is difficult for the argument to come through
If you spend equal amounts of time discussing positives and negatives what you are basically saying is, well there's some postives and negatives but i dont really have an opinion so ill let you decide - this is not a good look lele

thats not to say only talk about one side; having bits of the other side qualifies your argument and adds some nuance - "it is to a significant extent, but not wholly due to...." is much better than "it is entirely..."

also you can use the counter-argument and thesis/antithesis/synthesis to incorporate opposing views
 

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If I were to do another option topic for legal studies, different to the one at school, would that still be marked normally?
 

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If I were to do another option topic for legal studies, different to the one at school, would that still be marked normally?
Yes. However it is pointless to do so. Especially at this point in time.
 

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Could you please provide a band 6 essay sample?
 

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