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Module A Telling stories (1 Viewer)

whenever2gether

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Arghhhhh h! module A !

:mad: im doing cinema paradiso

it was speech!

its always been essays .. .!

i didnt expect speech ...

so i kinda tried to write essay but

mine was a mixture of an essay and a speech ..

my conclusion was not good. .

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how did u guys find it ???

did u find it ez?

expected?

and for this question can i make jokes in this speech ?

or im not allowed?

coz i put in some jokes and questions that are

humorous but rather not fit with content ... .i think
 

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I wasnt expecting speech as well.. but i had a feeling it MIGHT be a speech...
anyway, i just try to remember what i did for the last assessment on speech

I think you can put some jokes in it. because we r suppose to maintain interest of the responder. This is not really a serious speech anyway. language shouldnt be that formal, too.

Well, if you put jokes in it, the content becomes not so serious neway.

I put few rhetorical questions in it.
 

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didn't the question asked to write a speech to a lib community?
it have to be formal.. i think
 

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If the question asks you to write a formal essay, then it would not be appropriate to add any jokes to your speech. If on the other hand, the question insinuated a sense of informality to your speech, then a joke would be appropriate.

What was the exact question, if you remember.
 

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Did do Cinema Paradiso

It is a predictable question except written in a speech form.

However, the speech form is quite familiar, and simple, isn't it? I think i did use formal language, anyway, it is a quite okay question... :cool:
 

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the question is:

Your local library is conducting a speaking competition called "what makes a story great?" write the speech you present for the competition on this question.

In your speech, you should refer to Cinema Paradiso and ONE text of your own choosing.
 

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i just hope da marker can see my writing lol!!!
 

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i think for this part is important to write the element that director used in the film for example like setting characterisation and theme and camera angles.
 

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Well, it the examiners ask you for a speech in the context of a competition, it should be formal.
 

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