My Place- Need Help (1 Viewer)

[Beaky]

I have had mixed marks in Paper 1- Question with my AOS (MY Place)

Half Yearlies- 12/15
Trials- 7/15

My additional material is fine, it's just the content of my Place i am having problems with... My teacher reckons the main problem is that I dont talk enough about the process of change through the characters...

Does anybody suggest an essay plan or how to show change through Sally or any other character???

 

[Minai]

I wrote my essay based on what Hutton wanted, and it worked I guess..

My argument centred around the fact that change always happens, and while these can have rewarding or detrimental outcomes, they should be embraced because of its inevitablility - accept these changes for the better kinda thing.

I cant be bothered writing anything more right now, I'll jus scan my essay for this and post it here later

 

[Beaky]

Originally posted by Minai
I wrote my essay based on what Hutton wanted, and it worked I guess..

My argument centred around the fact that change always happens, and while these can have rewarding or detrimental outcomes, they should be embraced because of its inevitablility - accept these changes for the better kinda thing.

I cant be bothered writing anything more right now, I'll jus scan my essay for this and post it here later

ahhhhh k... yeah thanks Minai...
thats a nice start...

 

[d00d]

whats ur related material?

 

[Minai]

Alright its up
http://users.bigpond.net.au/minai/AOS.zip