My thesis and texts- feedback please (1 Viewer)

shenzei

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Hi, I was wondering if anyone could help and provide feedback for my thesis and texts please?

"imaginative journeys allow us to create alternate realms for us to escape from reality"

and my texts that i think i am dong are:

-(not totally sure, need help on which is the best to use) Stimulus: Wind in the Willows, Ivory Trail, Journey to the Interior

-Coleridge Poems: I was thinking Lime Tree Bower and maybe Kubla Khan or Rime of Ancient Mariner? (cause im not very sure about Kubla Kahn, could anyone please help explain it to me- the teacher didnt explain very well)

-Imaginary by Evanescence or Howl's Moving Castle US/Canada poster (most likely Evanescence)


OR this thesis: Through Imaginary Journeys, a person can create his or her own ideal or perfect world

or something like that, i dont know how to make the phrase better..


and the texts would be:


-Wind in the Willows

-Kubla Khan, Lime Tree Bower

-Imaginary


So what do you guys think?

EDIT: Second thesis added.
 
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