Need some tips for my essay... (1 Viewer)

gordo

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umm,
u didn't really give us much to work with

(of course I am predicting you won't post the essay :p )
 

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Hey i handed this essay in to class and my teacher gave me 15/20.....so i'd appeciate if i could get some ideas as to what i could do to improve my mark to 16/17/18....
 

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- Develop profound theses on Telling The Truth
- Build up solid examples, and
- Wank wank wank on about shit in a high-falluted tone
 

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I liked it. Better then those essays that go on and on for 13 pages. Yours was very succinct and sharp. Kudos.
 

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