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Who said you cant use similes? If its appropriate of course you can use it. However, probably the best technique you can use for your story is symbolic imagery. Try and develop the mood by describing the setting through metaphors, hyperboles, etc.
Well, it says in this HSC English book on belonging by Larry Grumley:
"Avoid using minor technical aspects simply because you know them. By the time you reach year 12 toy should have a catalogue of techniques. Don't use simile, for example, just because you know it. Research and analyse to be clear the technique adds to the strength of Belonging."
