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[deltaa]

hey people i have this english oral i have to do..and i reallyyyy need help with the texts away and lionheart..can u help me find techniques in them and how they relate to journeys..plzzz
thanx

 

[pLuvia]

Here I found some other people's analysis of Lionheart

Look for Lauren and Sjonks

Here's some on away

Look for anon and tara

Hope these help

If you want to check out more look in the Resource Section

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[deltaa]

thanz need help more thou

k thanx
can u tell me how lionheart and a horse with no name link and suggest journeys plz

 

[Riviet]

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That's happened a few times hasn't it?

 

[l-mercedes-l]

k thanx
can u tell me how lionheart and a horse with no name link and suggest journeys plz

noone can answer this for you. you need to find an idea about the phyiscal journey, eg; phyiscal journeys are inevitable and then link all your texts to that. how does away relate to that idea? how does lionheart relate to this idea?

aos is about finding an idea related to the core area - physical journeys and proving that your idea is valid because its shown in texts. you then need to weave into this discussion an understanding of why the texts support the ideas [basically what the composer thinks and why we believe that this is what they think, eg use of dialogue, rhyming, parody etc]

as it is a speech try and have a key concept/thesis this makes it easier for your audience to keep up and not get confused.

if i can be of any further help with structure pm me or my msn details are avail on my profile. i didnt do physical journeys but i can give you a few ideas about structure.

however, first you need to find the core idea [thesis]

saedie

 

[deltaa]

thanx need more help

ive chosen a diff text--cast away and "a horse with no name"
can u tell me how both relate to physical journeys?
any suggestion?
thanx

 

[l-mercedes-l]

you need a thesis. until you have this theres nothing anyone can do for you. i dont mean to sound rude but ive had a really long day and it seems like your just asking for answers not help.

the best answer ill give you is to reread my earlier post. i accept that theres some work to do but its the only way. once youve thought about it your arguement will be alot better.

what things do the texts have in common relating to the journey. what are they saying thats similar.

to eliminate the risk of spoonfeeding others with all your hard work, pm me if your feel like answering this question. i cant and wont say anything else helpful at this stage

 

[Riviet]

ive chosen a diff text--cast away and "a horse with no name"
can u tell me how both relate to physical journeys?
any suggestion?
thanx

I'm doing cast away too. The physical journey should be obvious and you should be able to develop a thesis easily.