Requesting some help for Module B speeches (1 Viewer)

[Sinni]

Hey guys, jumping right in, i have an assessment task coming up in a few weeks and i am currently preparing my essay. I am going to use Sadat, Keating and Bandler's speech with themes of unity and peace and reconcilliation and i intend to go with the 3 body paragraph structure. I am currently working on my Keating's paragraph and i seem to have difficulty finding relevant analysis for peace and reconcilliation, i think most of my paragraph right now is about unity, and i lack the other theme . Are there anyone that have done the speech and are willing to spare some time to help me out!, Thanks in advance!

 

[obliviousninja]

Do not structure your essay by speeches = lack of depth

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[obliviousninja]

Have a look at my sample in my essay sale thread in my signature, it might have something about keating.

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[Sambam429]

Do not structure your essay by speeches = lack of depth

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Are you saying not use speeches as sup texts?

 

[obliviousninja]

Are you saying not use speeches as sup texts?

No.

Do not use this structure:

Intro
Body 1 (speech 1)
Body 2 (speech 2)
Body 3 (speech 3)
Conclusion

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[Sinni]

No.

Do not use this structure:

Intro
Body 1 (speech 1)
Body 2 (speech 2)
Body 3 (speech 3)
Conclusion

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Well, i firstly intended on using the structure, 123 123 .. but the thing is, writing 6 topic sentences, and 6 everything else. Wouldnt this structure benefit me because i can squeeze in more analysis? and i dont trust myself writing 6 topic setence and everything else.

 

[strawberrye]

Well, i firstly intended on using the structure, 123 123 .. but the thing is, writing 6 topic sentences, and 6 everything else. Wouldnt this structure benefit me because i can squeeze in more analysis? and i dont trust myself writing 6 topic setence and everything else.

Unless specified by the question, don't include three speeches in an essay, focus on a four paragraph structure with two speeches analysed in detail. For Keating, consider other themes besides national unity, for example, he advocates for the importance of peace, the importance of commemoration of past sacrifices-which makes us treasure peace even more, consider what does the unknown soldier symbolises, consider how Keating is using the past as a platform to ensure Australia prosper in a peaceful way well into the future. Hope this helps The dichotomy between what is lost and what can potentially be gained is quite a strong and interesting one to examine further.

 

[obliviousninja]

Well, i firstly intended on using the structure, 123 123 .. but the thing is, writing 6 topic sentences, and 6 everything else. Wouldnt this structure benefit me because i can squeeze in more analysis? and i dont trust myself writing 6 topic setence and everything else.

I used this structure:

Idea 1 (Speech 1)
Idea 1 (Speech 2)
Idea 2 (Speech 1)
Idea 2 (Speech 2)
Idea 3 (Speech 1)
Idea 3 (Speech 2)