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Greninja340

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"She hated the party… but she made no general criticism of it", I wrote paradoxical language but that seems like a pretty trash technique are there any other techniques that are considered stronger (I want to show inconsistencies in human behaviour)
 

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Repetition of she, I guess u could construct a statement of how she is breaking down or unstable in a way, this one is a weaker one, the conjunction of but, I have like no context of what the text might be but I'm assuming you can say how this character is reticent, and despite her hatred towards the party, she is inclined to obscure it. lmao and the author puts in the third person honestly you can just incorporate the first technique with this to elaborate on her mental state being irrational

ALSO, THERE IS A SILIBANCE OF 'S' IN SHE SO U COULD USE THAT TO EMPHASISE ON THE REPETITION OF HER BREAKING DWON LMAO IDK IDK

I see a paradox lmao but I don't think my input might be helpful, lmao please tell me if u found this helpful
 
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