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hs17

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"quietly, struggling with his thought"
"hesitating, and with deep hatred of himself"


Any ideas???...btw these are stage directions and I'm looking to embed some language techniques within these
 

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"quietly, struggling with his thought"
"hesitating, and with deep hatred of himself"


Any ideas???...btw these are stage directions and I'm looking to embed some language techniques within these
metaphor
alliteration (wait for a better comment, alliteration is a weak technique.)
 

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use of adverb emphasises the hesitance within character?? My english skills really went BYE after hsc lol
 

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