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What mark do you think I would get for my essay? please help (1 Viewer)

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Ok in my essay for the extended response I only wrote one booklet, I stated the sources of change in my intro and the reasons for expansion then I elaborated on the reasons and used a case study on each reason. However I am worried because it feels like I didn't write that much. Would I get marked down for not writing enough?? or would I be ok with writing a booklet?
 

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Ok in my essay for the extended response I only wrote one booklet, I stated the sources of change in my intro and the reasons for expansion then I elaborated on the reasons and used a case study on each reason. However I am worried because it feels like I didn't write that much. Would I get marked down for not writing enough?? or would I be ok with writing a booklet?
anyone?
 

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Weird, I did it the other way around , that is stated the sources of change such as economical influence and how this leads to cushioning the economic cycle, social influence how it leads to diversification, legal and political/government influence how it leads to people expanding for tax minisation, technology for acquiring new resources..chucked in like shit loads of case study..did you sTate the reasons then the sources?
 

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Ok in my essay for the extended response I only wrote one booklet, I stated the sources of change in my intro and the reasons for expansion then I elaborated on the reasons and used a case study on each reason. However I am worried because it feels like I didn't write that much. Would I get marked down for not writing enough?? or would I be ok with writing a booklet?
As long as you answer the question with detail I don't see why you can't get a top range mark..problem is did your 3 pages answer the question with detail?
 

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As long as you answer the question with detail I don't see why you can't get a top range mark..problem is did your 3 pages answer the question with detail?

hey, yeah i just said the sources of change, then I just expanded on the reasons only and used a case study on all of the reasons so would I be able to get a good mark for the extended response??
 

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hey, yeah i just said the sources of change, then I just expanded on the reasons only and used a case study on all of the reasons so would I be able to get a good mark for the extended response??
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Ok in my essay for the extended response I only wrote one booklet, I stated the sources of change in my intro and the reasons for expansion then I elaborated on the reasons and used a case study on each reason. However I am worried because it feels like I didn't write that much. Would I get marked down for not writing enough?? or would I be ok with writing a booklet?
I'm on the same boat except i only wrote 2 pages before time was up. I was gutted as i really felt like i had soo much more to write. I spent way to much time on the report.
 

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Yeah I also managed also run out of time and only only had 30 minutes to do Q 27, I managed to write four sources of change and four reasons for expansion, but it was quite dogdy :p

So looks like your not the only one.
 

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I only wrote 3 pages without conclusion because I run out of time. I think I talked about Qantas with a few sentences for each point i remembered (external changes and reasons for expansion) but did not write anything about their definitions, e.g. economies of scale is bla bla then refer to Qantas. In addition I think I I combined some external changes with reasons....this is what I can remember at the moment..OMG I forgot

So please can anyone tell me how much I can probably get on that
 

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