i return
well guyz, i started this and havent been on in aaages!
my 3rd draft of my major work is due 2nd day back at school, and well i havent totally finished my 1st.
my short story although seeming to be quite basic for me, is totally confusing me.
it follows two separate stories that intertwine to become one, each sub-story is set in a different timeframe and from different viewpoints but are actively linked to one another.
The first sub-story is set in the present and taken from the 3rd person perspective.The second sub-story is set in the past, moving between 1936 and 1944, (World War II). It is taken from the 1st person perspective.
It goes from past to future, back and forth between a wwii nazi and his granddaughter. but my perspectives are totally confusing me, teacher feedback tells me to stop using anachronisms n shyt but i dont really know german so im like argh, *pretend im in wwii* i tell myself but it jz doesnt seem to work.
damn hitler.
now i want to change my whole perspectives thing- swap them around to make it easier and more interesting but im heaps lazy and cant b bothered.