The_Shaman
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Heeey, here's my story for section 2, any feedback from you guys would be great.
Cheers
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Who wants to read another creative story?? (1 Viewer)
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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
if u cant what its saying about the journey, god u shoudnt be sitting for the hsc.
I love it.. just beautifully captures, beautifully written
for me i know everyone may read it their own way, but really at the end
ifelt as though this guy was in so much pain but now when holding his loved one... like everything became pure.. he didnt want to say anything to zem i think it was. Because he was just so damn hurt, like its ture when we r in pain at one point we feel anger, hate and everything but then uno we come to a point where we know this is how it has to be.
i loved it hoenestly i would give you a range i dont know how high in the a range but yer i think u incorporated well the imaginative with the inner journey.
if u cant what its saying about the journey, god u shoudnt be sitting for the hsc.
I love it.. just beautifully captures, beautifully written
for me i know everyone may read it their own way, but really at the end
ifelt as though this guy was in so much pain but now when holding his loved one... like everything became pure.. he didnt want to say anything to zem i think it was. Because he was just so damn hurt, like its ture when we r in pain at one point we feel anger, hate and everything but then uno we come to a point where we know this is how it has to be.
i loved it hoenestly i would give you a range i dont know how high in the a range but yer i think u incorporated well the imaginative with the inner journey.
JimmyK
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good work Libbster ... u know who i am 
That story reads well, but seems a little short.
That story reads well, but seems a little short.