how to write better english essays pls help (1 Viewer)

[bbmiffy]

i know my writing is bad but i have no idea how to fix my mistakes and with an unresponsive teacher and very minimal feedback from past assignments, i feel like im just leading myself down an endless hole of failure lol. for some reason i can never write down everything i mean to say and my writing ends up being unclear. it's not a timing problem, i think more of a i'm just bad at writing problem. if it matters, i'm doing standard english

 

[Cute-Duckie]

do you have any friends in advanced english who can give you feedback on practise essays? this can help with sentence structure, general content integration (not content accuracy as it's a different course but that doesn't seem like that's the major problem here), etc. this can also work well if you're good at a subject that they're struggling with, so you can kind of do a 'swap' of practise responses or feedback to help each other out.

 

[spiderfan44]

i know my writing is bad but i have no idea how to fix my mistakes and with an unresponsive teacher and very minimal feedback from past assignments, i feel like im just leading myself down an endless hole of failure lol. for some reason i can never write down everything i mean to say and my writing ends up being unclear. it's not a timing problem, i think more of a i'm just bad at writing problem. if it matters, i'm doing standard english

if u want i can look over a sample of ur writing, just pm me the word file for an essay, im not the greatest at english myself though

 

[Cute-Duckie]

id be happy to look over anything too. I'm only class of '25 but I do english advanced and extension 1, and get 85%+ fairly consistently, so I may be able to give some feedback

 

[enchantedivory27]

its all about Reader-Composer dynamic and why the composer made certain choices with language to convey a certain message or purpose. a formula i like is technique, quote, effect on reader (how do YOU actually feel after reading this quote or about this particular theme or idea in the text??)

 

[vajayjay]

i know my writing is bad but i have no idea how to fix my mistakes and with an unresponsive teacher and very minimal feedback from past assignments, i feel like im just leading myself down an endless hole of failure lol. for some reason i can never write down everything i mean to say and my writing ends up being unclear. it's not a timing problem, i think more of a i'm just bad at writing problem. if it matters, i'm doing standard english

what texts do you do. ill send you mine if its the same