Agreed. It's just out of the blue. I feel sorry for parents who think that they're kids are so good etc. etc. only to find out that instead, he was one of the extremist and committed suicide, which in Islam is considered a great sin.
I think the first two paragraphs are not really necessary - maybe move them to CM and address the fifth paragraph outcomes above to replace it. According to MS word, I did a quick check and without the first two paragraphs, the word limit is 418, so use an extra 80 words rounding off your intro...
Are you including personal reflection/participant observation in your PIP? If you are, then you would have to write in first person otherwise it would sound wonkatated.
Get someone else to read it and see if they understand.
Please read through here.
You just start writing about your PIP, and just try and put in all of the stuff given in the link
Example, I'm doing Christianity and Adolescent Identity
Here's the start off of my CM:
Preferable you discuss/analyse your questionnaire first and then your...
Can we have the removal of an "auto" sign out if you're inactive for 5 (or maybe 10) minutes or more?
I started typing a long response to help someone out in the society forum and when I pressed "Post Quick Reply" I found that I had to log in again and I lost all the information I had typed...
Place - i.e where you are located - eg. You are a car waxing business, where do you think is the most appropriate place to carry out your service? In the country? In the city? Or in suburban areas? Why?
I think that's what it refers to in regards to your business however I am not so sure...
Guide To The Writing Of The PIP
Kevin Steed
Head Teacher Commercial Studies
St Marys Senior High School
Introduction
First Paragraph
• What is your PIP about and why did you choose the area of enquiry?
Second Paragraph
• What is your central hypothesis? ie what are you...
This would be useful:
www.sunnipath.com
also, there is modesty required in Islam which is why you see so many Msulim females wearing a scarf and loose clothing (such as a robe) so they don't draw attention from the guys. Males are also required to cover in proper clothing to avoid the...
I created a blog because I felt that I need to express my emotions that way. I could not turn to anyone else, even though I have a very close family, because one, they would only be sympathetic which would even add more to my distress because then I would feel very bad, and two, they wouldn't...
I am not very, but quite close to finishing off my CM for my PIP although I do regret choosing textiles - mainly because she stresses out if no-one has anything done which in turn stresses us out. Seriously, it's like she's doing the HSC instead of us. She started crying one time when a student...
No not really, I don't really devote myself to msn as I used to two years ago, but the layout is there, just get a teacher, or anyone else like mum, dad sister etc. to check to see if it makes sense to them and if they understand it.