The story is generally good, maybe a 13/15 atm. There are a few grammatical mistakes but im not going into that cos thats just pointless, im sure you can find them.
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With this sentence you are telling not showing. Do not do this in creative writing. The lazy yawn gives the reader the...
Uncanny i did the exact same thing. What course are you going to study now and at which uni? And by the way i think by accepting the second round offer it automatically voids the offer you accepted in the first round.
one can be challenged by another's sense of belonging. like in "as you like it" the obvious one is the conflicting nature of the aristocracy's attachment to the order of the court, in contrast to the shepherd's sense of belonging to the more simplistic pastoral landscape. which text are you...
second one is easy.
using s=ut + at^2 but u=0
hence s=at^2
rearranging t=sqrt(s/a) where s=4900 metres and a= 9.8ms^-2
therefore answer is 22.36 seconds.
i say the guy should ask. my last gf asked me and it took the fun out of the pursuit. also it somehow lead to an imbalance of power in the relationship with the girl now being the one forced to do the hard yards.
It is definitely possible to better your ranks through hard work, maybe even get a tutor. After half yearly's i was ranked 113/181 in adv english, but after the trial i was ranked 45/181, so put in the effort.
I say at least take the essay to the head of department and ask them to have a look over the paper, or even another member of that faculty to see if you have a genuine case. If so appeal for a remark.