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  1. Anh4life

    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    How long did this person have to write this? I personally feel like he could’ve written more in the reflection
  2. Anh4life

    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    Just sent, let me know when you’ve received it
  3. Anh4life

    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    My creative was based on nature as Robert Gray was the chosen poet that my grade had to study.
  4. Anh4life

    Also good luck to you too! All the best for trials and HSC😆😆😆

    Also good luck to you too! All the best for trials and HSC😆😆😆
  5. Anh4life

    Not really... but i do expect a giant birthday present after HSC. I guess that’s something i can...

    Not really... but i do expect a giant birthday present after HSC. I guess that’s something i can look forward to
  6. Anh4life

    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    They could also ask you to write a creative piece that was inspired by a poet, quote or picture from common module or module B ad C
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    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    I also recommend using a lot of synonyms since your wording is a bit too simple; an example is “trees” -> “evergreen, conifer, sapling...” “Walked” -> “saunter, stroll, amble...” Instead of using simplistic words for colours, try paint names for them e.g. “orange” -> “coral, marigold, ochre...
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    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    This I sent this website to a friend who had difficulty in writing her creative piece. This will give you an outline of where you stand - the website is called “Best descriptive writing sentences” Reading books of different genres can increase your vocabulary and give you a pretty good hint...
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    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    You need to fix your punctuation as well.
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    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    - You’re telling the reader quite a lot about what’s happening. Instead of telling, you should show the reader - ‘show dont tell’. - You need to add in quotation marks if you’re making a character speak. - the beginning had some pretty good imagery but as i read further, that kinda faded and...
  11. Anh4life

    should I be stressed about prelim? how should I study?

    I did jack-shit in year 11. You got nothing to worry about.
  12. Anh4life

    I hate the fact that my 18th birthday is 2 days before my English Paper 1 Trials! 😓😓😓

    I hate the fact that my 18th birthday is 2 days before my English Paper 1 Trials! 😓😓😓
  13. Anh4life

    Band 4 Standard English

    You shouldn’t be aiming for a band 4 but rather a band 6 no matter how good/bad you are at that subject. Limiting yourself to a band 4 will restrict your chances of you getting a band 5/6.
  14. Anh4life

    am i dead?

    You and I do some similar subjects such as SOR (but I do 2 unit), Math and English Standard. You should get an excel book for year 12 standard maths to help you with; they provide every example possible related to the HSC questions. How many trial papers have you done so far? If you need more...
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    Your past assignments and exams regarding those two topics might help you with annotating some...

    Your past assignments and exams regarding those two topics might help you with annotating some quotes.
  16. Anh4life

    Hi, there’s this website that might have some notes on vertigo and the castle. Those two topics...

    Hi, there’s this website that might have some notes on vertigo and the castle. Those two topics are also my chosen texts The website is called ‘Quizlet’.
  17. Anh4life

    Subjects: 1. Biology 2. Society and Culture 3. Studies of Religion II 4. Standard English 5...

    Subjects: 1. Biology 2. Society and Culture 3. Studies of Religion II 4. Standard English 5. Standard Math
  18. Anh4life

    SAC: BELIEF SYSTEMS AND IDEOLOGIES: ISLAM (NOTES PLEASE)

    Does anyone have notes for Belief Systems and Ideologies: Islam? I have an assignment that consists of two past HSC questions and since Society and Culture was just introduced into my school, we have no resources whatsoever. My teacher is an Arabic and HSIE teacher, so she has no experience in...
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    Has anyone got any notes for Robert Gray Poetry?

    Hi, could you also send me a copy of Robert Gray notes? Thanks in advance. Here’s my email: ado2020@amitystudent.com
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