Business Case study HELP (1 Viewer)

[JohnnySins101]

Hi, everyone I need some help, I've just finished my business case study, and I was wondering if by any chance you guys could help the boys out and take a look at my case study for some feedback, room for improvement etc. I'm in no rush, take your time. It's only due in like two days

Also, my marketing sector is a little long, any tips to shorten it would be great. The marking criteria and my business report is attached in the following documents,

Thanks in advance,