can someone please mark these english essays? (1 Viewer)

[tish1105]

hi guys, i have uploaded two documents containing my friends and my essays for the english hsc coming up. please check and mark these essays? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HELP US OUT
thanks

 

[e8zks]

hi guys, i have uploaded two documents containing my friends and my essays for the english hsc coming up. please check and mark these essays? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HELP US OUT
thanks

I had a quick skim, (Currently memorising my own, kms), They look good, high modality words, and nice array of quotes,
Are they meant to be generic, and r u planning on memorising them?

 

[tish1105]

I had a quick skim, (Currently memorising my own, kms), They look good, high modality words, and nice array of quotes,
Are they meant to be generic, and r u planning on memorising them?

oh great thanks! yes im planning on memorising
also which set of essays are you replying to?

 

[e8zks]

oh great thanks! yes im planning on memorising
also which set of essays are you replying to?

both, they look good.
How do u plan on memorising all of that in 2 days,3 for mod a,b and c.
Just curious cause I'm dying right now with memorising

 

[tish1105]

oh thanks
im walking around and reading them outloud and then after a few times i rmb them.

 

[e8zks]

oh thanks
im walking around and reading them outloud and then after a few times i rmb them.

I try that, it kinda works for me then I get distracted.
Any tips for memorising

 

[tish1105]

I try that, it kinda works for me then I get distracted.
Any tips for memorising

i think you should try writing them over and over again until u can write without looking

 

[e8zks]

i think you should try writing them over and over again until u can write without looking

Ok Thankyou and good luck

 

[aqwerty13402]

hi guys, i have uploaded two documents containing my friends and my essays for the english hsc coming up. please check and mark these essays? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HELP US OUT
thanks

From a very very brief skim, don't situate it entirely in the text. Especialy for common mod. You should be commenting on how Orwell's allegory reveals XYZ insight on the broader human experience. He does this THROUGH these decisions. So rather than cetnring your whole paragraph on how he shows it in the novel, you need to draw out the implications of these things for the broader human experience. Especially in your thesis etc. The chunk of ur paragraphs can remain the same, i would just tweak ur topic sentences on exam day to moreso reflect how THROUGH the microcosm of the party / oceanaia, orwell comments on the macrocosm (THE HUMAN EXPREINECE)

Does that make sense?

 

[tish1105]

From a very very brief skim, don't situate it entirely in the text. Especialy for common mod. You should be commenting on how Orwell's allegory reveals XYZ insight on the broader human experience. He does this THROUGH these decisions. So rather than cetnring your whole paragraph on how he shows it in the novel, you need to draw out the implications of these things for the broader human experience. Especially in your thesis etc. The chunk of ur paragraphs can remain the same, i would just tweak ur topic sentences on exam day to moreso reflect how THROUGH the microcosm of the party / oceanaia, orwell comments on the macrocosm (THE HUMAN EXPREINECE)

Does that make sense?

oh yes thank you so much that makes sense. Could you please check my second document which has my friend's essays,, you only need to check her narrative?

thanks

 

[aqwerty13402]

oh yes thank you so much that makes sense. Could you please check my second document which has my friend's essays,, you only need to check her narrative?

thanks

I think it reads well . I think Mod C is very hard for a student (me) to mark since its a bit more nuanced on what the markers look for depending on the day. But i think its nice

 

[tish1105]

I think it reads well . I think Mod C is very hard for a student (me) to mark since its a bit more nuanced on what the markers look for depending on the day. But i think its nice

thank you