First Three Words of your MW (Just 'Cause) (3 Viewers)

[Asheroth]

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[Cat_Orange]

At the moment it's:

"Death wasn't happy..."

But I do tend to change my mind often. So next week it'll be something completely different.

 

[antisheep]

mine is (at the moment... stillonly first draft)
"The congregation sat"

 

[Koume]

The little comment I have at the start of each section:
"How are we..."

And the actual story after:
"Is he the..."

 

[Quietly]

'Etta Viles and...'

 

[de1deonlysas]

No more could

 

[Archaelus]

I'd like to say the first FOUR words:

"The universe is gray."

First post. Hurrah.

 

[pungemo]

Welcome to the forums. One issue you may want to address there is that you have Americanised the word grey/gray. If you're quoting from a source that spells that way it should be fine though.

 

[sung]

I only need to say the first 2 words.
I run.
Whoa! how unbelievably succinct of me.

 

[elizabeth013]

It's a murder, isn't it?

Crime Fiction?

 

[elizabeth013]

"We stood naked."

 

[The Brucemaster]

Mines video instead of short story but anyway:

"Now Detective I -"

Preemptively im doing pomo not crime fiction.

 

[Archaelus]

Thx Pungemo, yet the diction is intentional (not only because I am part American, yet for other reasons which i will not bore you with )

 

[Porcia]

why do most start with a quote? just curious thats all - not a dissent

 

[Asheroth]

It's a nice way to start a story. It gives a bit of an indication of what the story's about and also shows the marker that you've done your research.

 

[namdog]

Mine starts with:

An elite Sydney


it doesn't really give any sort of clue as to what the story is about, except that it is situated in Sydney ...

 

[fruitarian]

Atm, mine are:

"Clockwise...anticlockwise. The"

I dunno if I'm going to stick a quote in to begin or not.

 

[capnlou]

First three words?

"I am on...

crazy eh?

 

[HinikuTheNinja]

'I never was'
'Blue. The coldest'
'There was a'
Haha. That's revealing. Then again, if you start with the little poem thingies I have at the start at each story, then...
'Teetering on the'
'Sweeping motions | of'
'Dreaming a dream'

 

[Neea]

"Smile for the..."
I'm sure we all know what comes next.