Influences on Shak'peares Writings (1 Viewer)

[lilsxcwog69]

Is this a good essay

 

[Aimz- Lou.]

It's pretty good..... I edited it a bit, so it is attached below. I hope this helps.

 

[lilsxcwog69]

Thanks Aimee

Your edited version of my essay cannot be opened as it brings up an error message!!

Could u send it to my hotmail

da14u88@hotmail.com

 

[lilsxcwog69]

Sorry Aimme I can open it, it jsut took a few attempts

Thanks for your help it has been grreatly appreciated.

 

[lilsxcwog69]

We recieved this context essay prior to us reading the play 'hamlet'.

We were given by our teacher notes on Shakespeares Life and Times.


Therefore would it be wise to include quotes from Hamlet in specific parts of my essay even though we havent been exposed to the plays context yet.

 

[Aimz- Lou.]

Hamlet is one of the only Shakespearean plays I am particularly familiar with. Your essay was very good, and it refered to the context of Shakespeare very well, but in order to improve it, I would suggest including quotes from ANY Shakespearean play wherever possible to support your arguments, and demonstrate that you truly know your stuff.

 

[lilsxcwog69]

Heres the edited version of my essay is it A++ now

 

[= Jennifer =]

Heres the edited version of my essay is it A++ now

a good idea would be to show it to your teacher when you get back to school or even a tutor. I am sure there are students who are great at writing essays and are very nice to help you out here and such but it is always good to get an expert opinion. goodluck with your hsc studies